A few days ago
Anonymous

i need write sth about my career goals, could u check?

this is what i wrote, seems a bit ridiculous, what do u think. also are there any mistakes

In the near future I plan on working over one’s skills and capabilities as hard as I can. Through my career I’d like to become a professional with formed and mature views at modern business. Ultimately, in years of continuing education and hard working it would be great to have own practice and be able to share knowledge and experience with younger generation.

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A few days ago
Wai Meng Y

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A few points:

1. You mentioned ‘near future’. What about your current goals?

2. Who is the ‘one’ mentioned in your first line?

3. What are some skills and capabilities that you want to work on?

4. Which industry do you want to become a professional in?

5. Is it safe to say that you want ‘formed and mature’ views of business? Does that lead to an open trap?

6. Is continuing education part of your career goals? Why?

7. If you say own practice, are you saying that you will do so in two to three years from now (near future)?

8. Sharing experience with younger generation – is that the best way to describe that you will have a wealth of experience?

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