A few days ago
How to correct this sentence!!?
This was the “Jazz Age,” the “Roaring ’20’s”; only one thing was on everyone’s mind: money.
I don’t think I have prper punctuation so if anyone could reowrd this sentence and make it correct I would greatly appreciate it!!
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I think it’s a great sentance.
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the only thing on everyone’s mind during the “Jazz Age” and the “roaring 20’s” was money.
perfecto lol
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I would try instead:
“This was the “Jazz Age”, the “Roaring ’20’s- only one thing was one everyone’s mind: money.
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I think the sentence alone is ok. However, the surrounding content may make it sound a little weird. I would suggest you add a few sentences in front and behind for better input.
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Looks fine to me.Perfectly correct.
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just take out the quotes, and it’s fine. the semicolon and colon are perfect.
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….only one thing was on everyones mind; money.
hope this helps!
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