A few days ago
Anonymous

How can I make this sentence better?

Or inspiring the people to make the right choices and standing up for what your beliefs are on making the future wonderful, like Martin Luther King Jr.

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A few days ago
stretch

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Just like Martin Luther King Jr, we can inspire people to make the right choice and stand up for their beliefs on making a wonderful future.

Since you started your sentence with “or” I suspect I’m missing something that may relate to the sentence above. But, that’s my take on it…

good luck

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A few days ago
Mimi N
If you stand up for your beliefs, you can make the future wonderful and inspire people to make the right choices like Martin Luther King, Jr.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
Like Martin Luther King, Jr. demonstrated, we can make the future a more wonderful place by inspiring people to stand firm for their beliefs and to make the best choices in life.
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A few days ago
OC
Like Martin Luther King Jr., people should strive to make the right choices and stand up for their believes in order to make the future a wonderful experience to live.
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A few days ago
pampers
if u what to make your future wonderful like Martin Luther King Jr inspire people to make the right choices and stand up for what your beliefs are in order to achieve a wonderful future.
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A few days ago
silksurreality
We can inspire the people to make the right choices and encourage them to stand up for their beliefs in making the future more wonderful, like what Martin Luther King Jr. did.

You may use “I” instead of “We”.

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A few days ago
SunnyDiego
You need the rest of your thought in there too. Here’s a suggestion.

I admire how people like Martin Luther King Jr. have inspired people to make the right choices by standing up for what is right and ultimately making a better future.

Is your emphasis MLK or you? I think your thought is a little incomplete and so a sentence is a little hard to structure but that’s my suggestion.

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A few days ago
CharJ,
All responses are great, but I’d address MLK as Dr. Martin Luther King.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
instead of starting with or

use – on

and at beliefs are on making

use – and instead of on

all the best

Ian

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