A few days ago
mmiller_2011

Help with sentence?

When Ronny mentions Dad’s death, Phillip quickly dismisses it as a accident that happened in the spur of the moment.

PS Ronny and Phillip contributed to Dad’s death.

I really want to change the spur of the moment. this is a book report and i want it to sound more official.

HELP im really confused people tell me to put it in past tense but can’t you talk about a PAST death NOW or am i wrong and it should be in past tense

Top 3 Answers
A few days ago
Anonymous

Favorite Answer

It sounds fine. You should just leave it like it is.
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A few days ago
Tatsbabe
Whenever Ronny mentions Dad’s death, Phillip is quick to dismiss it as an accident which happened in the heat of the moment.

There – hope that is OK for you!

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A few days ago
Manz
an accident that happened in a jiffy.
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