A few days ago
carmenclassof06

editing!?! Help with conclusion..suggestions.. 10pts best answer!!!!!?

As a student in your class, I always often found myself needing answers to questions in order to solidify my thoughts, wanting to better understand the previous concepts and material before the new class session. For example, you were available to help me when I needed help with grasping the concept of psychological disorder behavioral patterns and also when I needed to better understand the concept behind classical conditioning and unconditional response .Having set office hours allowed me to do this. I was able to come to you when I needed help. I really appreciated knowing when and where help was available. I liked the way you made me comfortable and not feel ashamed for asking for help. You also showed concern for my goals and interest outside of class. You followed your course class syllabus to a tee in which it states “Take advantage of my office hours. These hours are set aside specifically for dealing with student concerns regarding class material. If these hours are inconvenient, see me before or after class, send an e-mail, or call to schedule an appointment. Also, if you are not satisfied with your performance on an exam, see me so we can discuss your approach to studying and test-taking.”

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A few days ago
Arby

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Any time you write a conclusion, you need to recap your main points and “drive the points home.” Take a look at what you’ve written. Your main ideas seem to be that the instructor offered you help in consolidating your ideas about prior material before you started a new class and new material, and that the instructor’s regularly scheduled office hours made that instructor accessible. You say that the instructor put you at ease personally, and the structure of the course syllabus being followed made you comfortable academically. You also noted that the instructor made a point of reaching out to students by making specific suggestions about how to contact the instructor and by offering to address concerns.

What words would you use to summarize those qualities?

goes the extra mile, accessible, helpful, positive, structured, available, convenient, etc.

How about the following:

“I’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for going the extra mile for my success: Thank you for being supportive academically and personally, for being accessible in ways convenient to me, and for showing in word and deed that you want me to succeed. I feel I was better able to reach that goal with you as an instructor.”

Please don’t just copy and paste what ever answer you choose. Make it your own voice, not one of ours. Would you use the word accessible or would you use the word available for example? Use what sounds most natural to you.

I might also point out that the first sentence says “always often.” It can not be both, so leave out “always.” Use “often” as your qualifier.

You might want to read the whole thing out loud a couple of times before you turn it in. There are a few places where your sentences are a bit rambling. If you stumble over it when you read it out loud, it needs to be rephrased. I’d recommend that you paraphrase the lengthy quote, as well.

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A few days ago
Cero
Since that day when I walked into your promising classroom, you were the one who shaped my knowledge, and the person who I am today. Because of that I strive to do the best as I can and I will remember what you did for me forever. Thank you for your patience, your kindness, your generosity, and your wise teachings. In the future I feel sure and definite that I do more then I ever could in the past. I hope that you do not change in how you teach and I will be seeking more of your wisdom later on.
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4 years ago
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A few days ago
Anonymous
You really helped me,and without you i wouldn’t have become the person i am today. Thank you for your understanding and kind, helpful behavior towards me.
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A few days ago
Cero Strife
I think its perfect enough. Brilliant use of vocabs and correct grammar
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