editing!?! Help with conclusion..suggestions.. 10pts best answer!!!!!?
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What words would you use to summarize those qualities?
goes the extra mile, accessible, helpful, positive, structured, available, convenient, etc.
How about the following:
“I’d like to take this opportunity to thank you for going the extra mile for my success: Thank you for being supportive academically and personally, for being accessible in ways convenient to me, and for showing in word and deed that you want me to succeed. I feel I was better able to reach that goal with you as an instructor.”
Please don’t just copy and paste what ever answer you choose. Make it your own voice, not one of ours. Would you use the word accessible or would you use the word available for example? Use what sounds most natural to you.
I might also point out that the first sentence says “always often.” It can not be both, so leave out “always.” Use “often” as your qualifier.
You might want to read the whole thing out loud a couple of times before you turn it in. There are a few places where your sentences are a bit rambling. If you stumble over it when you read it out loud, it needs to be rephrased. I’d recommend that you paraphrase the lengthy quote, as well.
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