A few days ago

Does this make sense?

In school today, it was an unusual day. My teacher Mr. Man, is a numismatist and never talks about his coins, he only talks about schoolwork, and nothing else. But today he started talking about his coins which was really bizarre.

can anybody check the grammar, spelling, sentence errors or anthything else??? pleaseee

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A few days ago
goodworkswellnessresearch

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Here’s a version with all grammatical and syntax errors corrected:

It was an unusual day in school today. My teacher, Mr. Man, is a numismatist who never talks about his coins. He usually only talks about schoolwork and nothing else. Today was really bizarre because he started talking about his coins.

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A few days ago
gracebarber
there are some punctuation problems.

Here is what it should look like:

In school today I had an unusal day. My teacher, Mr. Man, is a numismatist, yet he never talks about his coins, only schoolwork and nothing else. But today he started talking about his coins, which was really bizarre.

I also changed some words to make it make more sense

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A few days ago
brandtgibson14
School was unusual today. My teacher Mr. Man is a numismatist and he never talks about his coins, he talks only about schoolwork and nothing else. It was really bizarre he started talking about his coins today.

– the first sentence was redundant with “day” and didn’t sound right.

– you don’t want to start a sentence with “But”/”And”/ etc.( I can’t remember the name for them, maybe “conjunctions” I don’t know but it’s not correct to do so.)

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A few days ago
Anonymous
Could I suggest:

Today was an unusual day in school. My teacher, Mr. Man, is a numismatist and never talks about his coins. He usually talks about schoolwork, and nothing else. But today he started talking about his coins, which was really bizarre.

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A few days ago
wayne_burdeshaw
In school today, it was an unusual day. My teacher Mr. Man, is a numismatist and (add HE )never talks about his coins( period goes here)he (capital H here)only talks about schoolwork, and nothing else. But(never start a sentence with the word”but”) today (capital T to start new sentence here)he started talking about his coins ( comma here for imphasis)which was really bizarre. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I hope I got it right. Maybe you could start the first sentence a bit better this way,,,,An unusual thing happened in school today.,,,,,You could ADD a last sentence like this,,,,,What could have caused such an unusual change in his behavior?………THIS is how it would look…..An unusual thing happened in school today. My teacher Mr. Man, is a numismatist and he never talks about his coins. He only talks about schoolwork, and nothing else. Today he started talking about his coins,which was really bizarre.What could have caused such an unusual change in his behavior?
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4 years ago
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A few days ago
susan e
I was going to but there wasn’t school today.can’t you use spellcheck?????BTW I see 2 errors offhand.
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A few days ago
S&S
No, it makes no sense
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