A few days ago
Anonymous

Could you please refine and polish my English words below?

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Dear Sir,

We have made travel reservations for Mr. Mark Anthony here in Malaysia. So, it’s no longer necessary for the Secretariat Committee of the Conference in London to handle the ticketing for him. However, we include his flight data in the on-line registration form in case the Secretariat still needs the info to arrange for his transportation and etc as he arrives in London.

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A few days ago
Jay Moore

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Dear Sir,

We have made travel arrangements for Mr. Mark Anthony here in Malaysia. It is no longer necessary for the Secretariat Committee of the Conference in London to handle this. We have included his travel itinerary in the on-registration form in case the Secretariat needs this information to make transportation and other arrangements for him as he arrives in London.

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A few days ago
John V
It needs very little editing:

Dear Sir,

We have made travel reservations for Mr. Mark Anthony here in Malaysia. So, it is no longer necessary for the Secretariat Committee of the Conference in London to handle the ticketing for him. However, we are including his flight data in the on-line registration form, in case the Secretariat needs the info to arrange for his transportation, etc when he arrives in London.

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A few days ago
Nterprize
Dear Sir,

We have made travel reservations for Mr. Mark Anthony here in Malaysia. So, it is no longer necessary for the Secretariat Committee of the Conference in London to handle the ticketing for him. However, we will include his flight data in the on-line registration form in case the Secretariat still needs the information to arrange for his transportation etc. as he arrives in London.

Thanking you,

Yours sincerely,

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