A few days ago
Anonymous

Could you please check my English below and fix it if there is any grammatical errors? Thanks?

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We have just got obtained news that the reservation at Hotel A is negative. They said they cannot give us 6 days’s reservation. The hotel had a high occupancy rate at that time by those who ask for two-weeks reservations, so they prefer to give reservation to those people.

Meanwhile we already booked a hotel room in Hotel B in Takati. This is a little far from the area of Conference, but this is the only hotel that we could find so far.

However, we’re still searching for good hotel near the Conference area. We’ll keep you updated on this. If you have anything to ask, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Thanks

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We have just obtained news that the reservation at Hotel A is unavailable. They said they cannot give you 6 days reservation. The hotel has a high occupancy rate at that time by those who ask for two-weeks reservations, so they prefer to give them priority.

Meanwhile we have already booked a hotel room in Hotel B in Takati. This is a little further from the conference area but the only one available at the moment.

However, we will still attempt to find closer accomodation to the Conference for you. We’ll keep you updated on any progress. If you have any other enquiries, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Thanks

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A few days ago
Lionel L
We have just obtained news that the reservation at Hotel A is unavaible. They said they cannot give us 6 days’ reservation. The hotel had a high occupancy rate at that time by those who ask for two-weeks reservations, so they prefer to give reservation to those people.

Meanwhile we already booked a hotel room in Hotel B in Takati. This is a little far from the area of Conference, but this is the only hotel that we could find by the time being.

However, we’re still searching for good hotel near the Conference area. We’ll keep you informed on this. If you have anything to ask, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

Thank You,

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A few days ago
Gypsydayne
We have just recieved news that we can not make reservations at Hotel A. The hotel reservationist said that they cannot give us a six day reservation because there is a high occupancy rate at that time for those who are seeking two week reservations so those people are given reservations first.

Meanwhile, we booked a hotel room at Hotel B in Takati. This is a little far from the area of the conference, but this is the only hotel that we could find so far. However, we are still searching for a good hotel near the conference areal. We’ll keep you updated on this. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

Thanks

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A few days ago
Mnemosyne
Formal: We have just obtained news that the reservation at Hotel A is unacceptable/terminated. The hotel staff said that they could not give us 6 days’ reservation/a reservation for six days. The hotel had a high occupancy rate at that time by those who had asked for two-week reservations, so they preferred to give reservation places to those people.

Meanwhile we booked a hotel room in Hotel B in Takati. This is a little far from the area of the Conference, but this is the only free hotel that we have been able to find so far.

However, we are still searching for a good hotel near the Conference area. We will keep you updated on this. If there are any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Thank you

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A few days ago
lavender v
Here it is!!!

We have just got news that the reservation at Hotel A is not possible. They said that they cannot give us reservation for 6 days. The hotel has a high rate of occupancy of the people who ask for two-weeks reservations at this time, so they give preference to them.

Meanwhile we have already booked a hotel room in Hotel B in Takati. This is a little far from the area of Conference, but this is the only hotel that we could find so far.

However, we’re still searching for a good hotel near the Conference area. We’ll keep you updated regarding this matter. If you have anything to enquire, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Thank you!

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A few days ago
imzi99
My opinion:

We have just received news that the reservation at Hotel A is not available. They said the hotel is very full and they are giving priority to those who requested a two week reservation so they are unable to give us our 6 day reservation.

In the mean time, we have booked some rooms in Hotel B in Takati. This hotel is not as close to the conference area as we would like, but it is the only hotel we have found so far.

However, we’re continuing to search for a good hotel near the Conference area. We’ll keep you updated on this matter. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Thank you.

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A few days ago
Dragon’sFire
I will correct mistakes only.

We just received news that our reservation at hotel A is

cancelled- a 6 days reservation- the hotel has a high accupancy rate at that time, due to- give reservations to them.- we made reservations at hotel B in Takati, a little farther from – only hotel that was available til now – We are, however, still looking for a good hotel near the conferrence area. We’ll keep you posted on this-

If You have any questions, The rest is good!, You cannot start a sentence with, meanwhile, and ,however…

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A few days ago
Anonymous
We just received word that your reservation at Hotel A is negative (What do you mean by negative? If you mean it is not available you need to say so – “We just received word that your reservation at Hotel A is not/no longer available.” You need to pick between “not” and “no longer.”)

Meanwhile, we have made reservations at Hotel B in Tahati. We will continue to research for a hotel as close as possible to the conference site. We will keep up updated. If you should have any questions or concerns with these arrangements, please feel free to contact me at xxx-xxxx.

Thank-you for your patience as we work to resolve this situation.

Your Name Goes Here

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A few days ago
curious connie
We have obtained news —–give us a six day——The hotel has a high occupancy rate at that time. We have booked a hotel—–

The rest is fine.

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5 years ago
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these are my fixings: i’m not really sure about it…but you can try… There is always an existing argument that if it is fair for these universities to lower their academic entrance level for these needy rural students. People who oppose this reform acclaim that this prat ice would decline some students who may have a better marks than these enrolled needy rural students. This maybe true to some extent, the government, however, should give a priority to the stabilization of the society. It is indisputable that the gap between the rich and the poor jeopardize the development of society and give rise to social unrest, which caused quite a number of crimes every year. To solve these social problems, we must promulgate effective degrees like giving the poor more chances to receive advanced degrees. Only in this way, we can fundamentally bridge the gap between the poor and the rich and maintain our social well-being. good luck…^___^
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