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Can you help me make this sentence sound better, revise it?
Cyrus is constantly lying to his sons about the the battles he participated in while in the army but “no one could call him a liar. […] because the lie was in his head, and any truth coming from his mouth carried the color of the lie” (Steinbeck 18)
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It’s a lil long but sounds conversational, a good job, but I’ll share my idea… good luck!
Cyrus continuously lies to his sons about the the battles he participated in while in the army, yet “no one could call him a liar […] because the lie was in his head, and any truth coming from his mouth carried the color of the lie”. (Steinbeck 18)
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Although Cyrus embellishes his war stories for the benefit of his sons, no one could call him a liar, because “the lie was in his head, and any truth coming from his mouth carried the color of the lie.” (Steinbeck 18)
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Cyrus lived the lie himself so it became a part of his Ora and creativity without contradictory.
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i like the one that u have
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NO i CAN’T
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