Can someone help me structure this sentence?
“Tanjung Rhu Resort: Langkawi’s attempt at being environment friendly” but don’t think thats good enough. Help??? 😀
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this makes a good title, but not a good first sentence.
When white sand beaches are the norm, and dense forrests studded with tropical flowers surround travellers, few travellers realize the resort maintains beauty while practicing environmentally sound practices.
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Langkawi’ Tanjung Rhu Resort – Environment’s Friend
‘Attempt’ is a negative in your use. Be positive.
“In Langkawi, the Tanjung Rhu Resort is unique, as they concern them selves not only with monetary profit, but with the environment”
This way the reader sees a comparison to what other resorts do (only make money) and shows that this one stands out. Also, maintain an active voice throughout the paper.
“Tanjung Rhu Resort: Environmentally sound in Langkawi”
Lol, good luck.
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