A few days ago
Anonymous

Are those sentences written in a good English ?

Thanks for saying me if those sentences are written in a good English or not !

1. Do not talk so loud : we are being listened.

2. I was refused to visit the nuclear power station.

3. He was refused the entrance to the club.

4. He would like his wife to stay home once they will be married.

5. I did not say to him anything so that he does not reveal the secret.

6. Leave earlier so that you does not arrive late.

Thanks a lot !!! 🙂

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A few days ago
Pan_Demic

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No they are not. Corrections follow:

1. Do not talk so loudly; someone is listening to us.

2. I refused to visit the nuclear power station.

3. He was refused entrance to the club.

4. He would like his wife to stay home once they are married.

5. I did not say anything to him so that he will not reveal the secret.

6. Leave earlier so that you do not arrive late.

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A few days ago
Solarcide
1. Do not talk so loud – someone is listening.

2. I was denied permission to visit the nuclear power station.

3. He was refused entrance to the club.

4. He would like for his wife to stay home once they are married.

5. I did not say anything to him so that he could not reveal the secret.

6. Leave earlier so that you do not arrive late.

Thanks a lot !!! ;P

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A few days ago
yancychipper
1. Don’t speak so loudly, someone is listening.

2. I was not allowed to visit the nuclear power station.

3. He was refused entrance into the club.

4. After they are married, he would prefer that his wife stay at home.

5. He can not reveal the secret because I did not tell him anything.

6. Leave early enough so you won’t be late.

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A few days ago
snoopy l
1. Keep quiet, others are listening.

2. I was refused permission to visit the nuclear power station.

3. He was refused entrance to the club.

4. He wants his wife to stay home once they are married.

5. I did not tell him anything he cannot reveal.

6. Leave early so you will not be late.

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A few days ago
the_bloody_grinch
Pan_Demic’s corrections are good, but there were two comma errors…

5. I did not say anything to him, so that he will not reveal the secret.

6. Leave earlier, so that you do not arrive late.

It seems to me that you could be meaning something else in number 2, too, but I do not know which it is that you are trying to say.

“I was not allowed to visit the nuclear power station” is what I thought you were trying to say.

Other than those things, Pan_Demic is good

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4 years ago
dougan
Your english is nice, it is readable with is better than i will assert for some community audio device. as long because it is not incomprehensible that’s nice. some shoppers somewhat in factors like books and authors have a historic past of having some matters with people who ask in unfavourable grammar. a lot of them are writters so with a bit of luck you are able to forgive them 🙂 For the main section even in that section the only concern is with the continual misspellers, chatspeakers, and capital letter typers. If human beings can not realize it they gained’t answer it.
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A few days ago
notyou311
Every single one of thm is wrong. Find someone to tutor you in English.
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A few days ago
Trina
NO THEY ARE NOT IN CORRECT ENGLISH.
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