A few days ago
Anonymous

HOPEFULLY BIG IMPROVEMENT!!!! ESSAY!! check it out!!!!?

When I look at this picture of myself , I realize how much I’ve grown physically, mentally, and as a person in the last few years. Less than one month after this photograph was taken, I arrived at North Shore Community College without any idea of what to expect. Surrounding me in this picture are the things which were most important in my life at the time, and today’s photo would be different.

If I am accepted to Northeastern University I will strive to be a tremendous community member and student by devoting all my time to my studies and to Northeastern. .I believe that because I work hard and don’t give up easily. I believe that I am obligated to use my talents in a constructive manner, in a manner that benefits society in a manner that will help maintain the strong community on the Northeastern campus.

Becoming a Doctor has been one of my dreams for as long as I can remember, ever since I was a little girl. Now that I am older I am truly passionate about becoming a Doctor, and believe I am ready to rise up and meet this challenge. I love helping others and making them feel more comfortable. I am passionate about becoming a Doctor so that I can help others. I have shared the lives of my patients as a personal care attendant. I have laughed and I have cried with them. I think I am ready to take the next step and actually help my patients as a certified Doctor.

The medical career gives me the unique opportunity to express my many talents while benefitting human life. Completing medical school has always been a dream of mine. like many others I have been through times of sorrow. I have watched love ones in pain, with uncertain futures, and just recently an Uncle has reappeared in the lives of my family. I am glad to see him back and I’m sad and worried about is life. He has been diagnosed with throat cancer and must undergo chemotherapy Which was a complete shock to me and my family. Watching his struggles urges me to learn more about steps into recovery and how I can help. It is my experience that Physicians don’t just treat bodies; they also listen to patients with their heart and mind because sometimes illness is helped by friendship.

I believe that I have good social skills, and I believe that these skills will make a good foundation to be a successful student and Physician. . As a sales consultant, I interact and communicate with a variety of people, expanding my ability to discuss a wide range of topics. Because people seem to frequently disclose their personal issues to me, I have learned to become a good conversationalist and an excellent listener. I believe that my ability to improve and enhance my communication skills makes me well suited to pursue a medical career.

I am highly motivated to succeed. I dramatically improved my grades following a time at North Shore Community College. In the past year I have learned a lot through my experiences and relationships. I’ve realized that I was trying so much to make everyone else happy that I wasn’t keeping myself and my interests in mind at times when I should have. Once I realized what goal I wanted to pursue in my life, I plan to work hard to succeed in achieving this goal.

I have been diligent in my pursuit of medicine as a career because I am convinced that medicine offers me the opportunity to live a fulfilling, rewarding life dedicated to helping others. I will enter medicine eager to learn. Attending Northeastern University would be one of the greatest rewards for my motivation and persistence for success.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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Personally I think it’s too negative and your attitude is more of a Nurse than a doctor.

Social skills are not a requirement, they can be a hinderance.

Your job is not to make people feel comfortable but to cure them of a disease or ailment, even if you have to hurt them a little.

Don’t be so negative

Oh my grades are much better now

Oh I used to suck the big one but now I only suck the little one!

That’s what it sounds like

They’ll SEE your grades, make no misatake of that.

Wanna be a doctor eh

Ready to work 100 hours a week the moment you hit NorthEastern until the day you finished Intership, that’s 8 more years.

You got to show them you’re ready to do that kind of a workload

Ready to take on Math oriented Organic Chemistry (lots of Isomoers lots of Benzine Rings), STaticists, Biology, Microbiology

ready to get involved as a test tube washer in a Post Graduate Biology Project that is going to take 2-4 years to finish and you voullenter to do the scutt work (maybe for ONLY a letter of recomendation, no creidts).

Ready to give your weekends up for that project.

You have to BUY access to the MEDICAL data base computer.

You really ready to dive into this.

You have to excite them about you

Did you research NorthEastern.

Who’s doing what biology, microbilogy, biochemistry research there.

You ready to knock on doors and BEG for a position filing papers, cleaning lab equipment just so you can stare over their shoulders and see what they are doing (and you will be doing THEIR work in MEDICAL SCHOOL)

You ready to do what it takes to get a staff PHD to write you a letter to a Medical school stating how hard you worked for the 3 years you were there and maybe even get you name listed in their final project as an assistant.

You ready to go out the the LIBRARIES (Plural, even those in other Universities) and come back with Xerox copies of stuff the Prof might need to have for citations.

No credit of course. Just a letter if they like you.

And you have to keep your grade up HIGH on the other course.

Way high over 4.0

You want them to be proud of you.

So you need to be proud of you and stop apologizing for your screw ups in High School.

They’re gonna read your transcripts, they KNOW how much you screwed up!

You don’t have to remind them of it or POINT IT OUT TO THEM

You have to be mentally ready to work over Labor Day weekend from Friday afternoon til Tuesday morning on your first day of Medical School

Because they may make you do it

Just to bug you

All you friends will be BBQ and beer bonging and you’ll be walking the floors of some hospital at 2 AM checking on patients

Now

Go and write something that IMPRESSES the reader

This is a popularity contest and they want someone who is ready to get the JOB done

You’re not applying for a HEEE HAAA liberal Arts program

The program you’re applying for killed four of my best friends who barely squeeked out of College with enough credits to get a BA in Botony and couldn’t even get into the Granada Medical School

And it started with ORGANIC CHEMISTRY and 10 pages of unmarked BENZINE rings on the FINAL exam in which you had to put in all the Cs and Os

Image 200 Benzine rings with NO chemical markers and YOU have to fill in the blanks.

They’re looking for people with the RIGHT STUFF

IMPRESS THEM

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A few days ago
Anonymous
i think its good. make sure u got and epiphany and really stand out. u did a good job
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