I am sorry to say it, but if you seek to treat people out of personall satisfaction, you are going to be sadly let down. There are plenty of people entering the medical field in hopes of changing the horrible face our doctors currently have en masse. The truth is, human nature will not allow you to “treat a person” for very long. Personal relationship and the like are limited, not only for security reasons. Your big and loving heart cannot sustain the losses envolved with the medical field. The more your job will demand of you, the less energy you will have. The greif of loss will demand even more energy, and so forth. Doctors consume themselves in logic, and abandon emotion so that they can focus on finding their cures and whatnot. Most doctors become completely apathetic, dealing with their patients in a way that benefits them more than anything. For instance, the doctor that prescribes a pill, not suited to the patient’s needs as much as to the commission he will get for prescribing it.

hope. the final frontier.

You need grammer help. It’s “they’re patients” not “there.”

It’s cried, not cryed.

The general tone is good but you do need a proofreader.

sorry but i cant help u