Why not pay someone that you know personally to perform this service for you? Or maybe someone will do it for free. Or put it up on Yahoo answers, LOL.

I have read and edited many, many personal statements. Always for free, because my husband is always asking me to read something for one of his medical students. OMG, some of them are simply AWful. Definitely have someone with writing experience look them over. I cannot vouch for the credibility of online services, I would reccomend the personal approach if possible.

There are many personal statement editing service available online. But not all of those services are good. You have to try the paid services to get the best results. Also, you can check the online reviews and offers first before you decide.

“i’d desire to commence my own assertion with some thing grand, like maximum of school applicants attempt to do each and each 3 hundred and sixty 5 days, yet I won’t. I won’t point out the reality that i comprehend a thank you to speak 4 languages, or that lower back in middle college I have been given 5 medals in one day. Nor will i attempt to impact all people with my universal utilization of massive words consisting of unostentatious or unsophisticated, which all propose effortless. in spite of the shown fact that, i’m adequate of somebody to freely vent out my individuality in this piece of paper.” there’s somewhat greater, yet i’m sorry i’m falling aslep.

Greengo is correct. I just wanted to add that if there’s no one around you that you can ask, talk to one of your present or past teachers or your guidance counselor and ask them for a few minutes of their time to go over your essay and let you know any suggestions they may have to improve it. Good luck.