A few days ago
LoCo#33

Please help me edit my English?

The son is learning walking meditation from his father. Actually his son is a driver. During their meditation the father notice that his son couldn’t concentred, kept on moving his hand. The father asked, why are you moving hand? why you don’t concentred? The reply from the son; father I was used to driving the car every day, that is why my hand kept on moving or shaking. Father immensely laugh and told him, me too sleeping with your mother every night, but I didn’t shake or bend my vertex.

This is just humours. Please correct in proper English.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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I will put the edited portions in parenthisese (edited portion)

(A) son is learning walking meditation from his father. Actually(,) his son is a driver. During their meditation(,) the father (noticed) that his son couldn’t (concentrate), (and)kept on moving his hand. The father asked, why are you moving (your)hand? (Why) you don’t (concentrate)? (The son replied, “Father I was used to driving the car every day, that is why my hand kept on moving or shaking.”)

I cannot understand the last part, so I am unable to edit it. I am sorry.

Be well.

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A few days ago
nusdunda
The son was learning walking meditation from his father. Actually his son was a driver. During the meditation lesson, the father noticed that his son couldn’t concentrate much, he kept moving his hand.

“why are you moving hand?” the father asked, “why you don’t concentrate?”

“Father I am driving a car every day, that is why my hand keep moving.” reply from the son.

Then father immensely laugh and told him, “me too! I sleep with your mother every night but look! I am not shaking or bending my vertex.”

Very good!!! HA HA HA

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A few days ago
jmcdelprado35
The son is learning walking-mediation from his father. Actually, his son is a driver. During their meditation, the father noticed that his son couldn’t concentrate, kept on moving his hand. The father asked: “Why are you moving your hands? Why don’t you concentrate?” The son replied: “Father, I am used to driving the car everyday. That is why my hand keeps moving or shaking.” Father, loudly laughs and told him, “I sleep with your mother every night, but I don’t shake or bend my vertex.”
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A few days ago
whiskey_tears
the father is teaching his son who is a driver about walking-meditation and during the meditation the father noticed that his son couldn’t concentrate, he kept on moving his hand and then the father asked, why do you kept on moving your hand? why don’t you concentrate? then the son replied i was used to driving everyday, that explains why my hand kept on moving and shaking, his father immensely laughed and told him, “me too, but i dont shake or bend my vertex thinking that i’ve been sleeping with your mom..

this is so funny!

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A few days ago
Pepsi
A father and son would go on meditative walks daily. The father noticed that his son was having trouble concentrating on these walks and ask his son about it. “Son he said;” “Why do you keep moving your arm?” “Well father”, the son said, “You know, I have been driving for years and my arm and hand are use to turning the wheel of the car as I drove a long.”

The father laughingly replied to his son saying;” “Well,I slept with your mother for years every night but you don’t see me shaking my, you know, huh, my vertex.”

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A few days ago
chicken_satay91
A young man working as a driver, was learning walking mediation from his father. During their mediation, the father notice his son was not concentrating and asked him what happen. “I am used to driving everday and I could not stop helping myself to stop driving during the mediation” the son replied. The father in his hysterical laughing told the son ” but I sleep with your mother every night yet I didn’t shake or bend my vertex”

Is this what you want?

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A few days ago
Anonymous
i dont get that?
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A few days ago
P B
not funny anyway…
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