I changed cheif to chief

I changed Carribean to Caribbean

I took out the comma between ‘year’ and ‘St.Thomas’

I put a comma between ‘sugar’ and ‘which’

hope i helped♥

Sugar, the chief crop of the Carribean Islands, is produced annualy by St. Thomas; sugar can be purchased at the Local Farm Fresh Store in Williamsburg.

This is the correct way to write the sentence. I’ve been studying a lot of grammar for the SAT and im positive that this is gramatically correct.

CHIEF WAS SPELLED WRONG

Change it:

“Sugar is the chief crop, grown in the Caribbean Islands and every year, St. Thomas produces a lot of sugar, which can be purchased here in Williamsburg, at our local Farm Fresh Store.”

spelt chief wrong, etc. Good luck!

“Sugar is the chief crop grown in the Caribbean Islands, and every year St. Thomas produces a lot of sugar, which can be purchased here in Williamsburg at our local Farm Fresh store.”

Fixed a couple of spelling errors as well as taking away one comma and adding a comma.

Sugar, the chief crop grown in the Caribbean Islands, particularly the island of St. Thomas, can be purchased here in Williamsburg at our local farm fresh store.

Change it:

“Sugar is the chief crop, grown in the Caribbean Islands and every year, St. Thomas produces a lot of sugar, which can be purchased here in Williamsburg, at our local Farm Fresh Store.”

Eh. I’m pretty sure that’s right. If not, I tried. xD

Every year St. Thomas produces a lot of sugar, which can be purchased here in Williamsburg at our local Farm Fresh store.”