A few days ago
shimoz

help with ending of a story?

hi, i need to write a story about the inner journey. We have to base it around a quote, mine is “We dont receive wisdom, we must discover it for ourselves after a journey that no once can take for us or spare us.”

It’s about a girl who realises she has to accept that her dad has found true love (her stepmum-to-be). I need help with the last sentence, i don’t know how to end it nicely.

A hand gently rubs my shoulder. Caroline sits down beside me. I’m sorry for treating you so bad Caroline. I guess it’s just been hard to accept that dad has found someone to love again. You arent so bad after all, I guess.” Caroline smiles warmly.

“You ain’t so bad yourself either Abbie.”

We both blurt out with a laugh and gaze up at the night sky, …._____________________________________________

any suggestions?

thanks!

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A few days ago
Kaz

Favorite Answer

“Perhaps you’re not so bad after all….” Caroline says with affection.

“You’re not so bad either hun”

Then we both look at each other, finally with some understanding….

GOOD LUCK, I’M SURE YOU’VE DONE AN EXCELLENT JOB WITH THE REST OF THE STORY……

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A few days ago
Nicole H
….we both blurt out a laugh and look into the smiling face of the other, ready for whatever the future might bring.

not my best work ever but hey it works.

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A few days ago
t_shwani
wait,wait,wait i think you need more wow words like amazing sky or the black gloomy sky.somthing like that
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