help with ending of a story?
It’s about a girl who realises she has to accept that her dad has found true love (her stepmum-to-be). I need help with the last sentence, i don’t know how to end it nicely.
A hand gently rubs my shoulder. Caroline sits down beside me. I’m sorry for treating you so bad Caroline. I guess it’s just been hard to accept that dad has found someone to love again. You arent so bad after all, I guess.” Caroline smiles warmly.
“You ain’t so bad yourself either Abbie.”
We both blurt out with a laugh and gaze up at the night sky, …._____________________________________________
any suggestions?
thanks!
Favorite Answer
“You’re not so bad either hun”
Then we both look at each other, finally with some understanding….
GOOD LUCK, I’M SURE YOU’VE DONE AN EXCELLENT JOB WITH THE REST OF THE STORY……
not my best work ever but hey it works.
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