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Can you please read this intro paragraph and tell me what you think? Its supposed to be an intro to an essay on why kate is a hero in the story, after the first death.

Thanks in advance for the hlp.

Here it is.

What do Batman, Superman, and Spiderman all have in common? They are all known to be heroes. Why is that? Well, it’s not because they have superpowers; it’s because of the fact that they all have some of the most common heroic qualities, such as; courage, intelligence, and selflessness. Any person, big or small, can be a hero. All they need to do is possessA some heroic qualites. In the story, After the First Death, Kate is a person whos heroic qualities resound throughout the novel

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