A few days ago
Does this sentence make sense?
I hope that a coherent group-wide vision is created to provide a preamble for a successful year…
I am writing something, and I was just wondering if this makes sense to you and if ive used the tenses wrong or anything
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A few days ago
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The sentence makes sense, but only after 2 or 3 readings. Cut some words, simplify the syntax.
I hope that we share a vision, which shall ensure our continued success.
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A few days ago
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A few days ago
Yes, your sentence does make sense; however, your second sentence is far more coherent …
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A few days ago
Nope. It makes excellent sense.
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A few days ago
yes it does
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A few days ago
ok whoever u tell that to, they are just gonna nod and say” yeah…..yeah”
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