A few days ago
Please help me with this sentence…..I need to rewrite it using a metaphor?
He liked the smell of pastries.
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Simple metaphor:
The smell of the pastries was a symphony.
Extended metaphor:
The smell of the pastries was a Beethoven symphony played by the London Philharmonic in the Sydney Operal Hall with Richard Strauss conducting.
Additional note:
Metaphor for a stack of pastries:
A mountain of pastries.
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A few days ago
A metaphor is a comparison NOT using like or as.
So make a comparison USING like or as… then take out the like or as….
like this…
The smell of pastries wafted in like a cloud of flavor.
take out LIKE and make it was because you are comparing them.
The smell of pastries WAS a cloud of flavor.
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A few days ago
the smell of pastries are to him as the beauty of a fragrant rose is to a bee.
im not sure if thats exactly a metaphor but it sounds good! good luck!
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