Let’s look at the first sentence. Eras do not grow. Every era has modern technology – even if it is The Wheel. The essay is about genetic engineering. Start by talking about genetic engineering; but only if you’ve learned anything about it.

Developments in modern technology, such as the discovery of the ability to manipulate genetic codes, have brought about questions surrounding the ethics, morality and beneficial effects of genetic engineering and research. This paper will address this hotly debated topic.

It’s nice that you have what I call a “grand entrance” to your paper. In college, however, grand entrances won’t fly in your classes (except in your primary English courses). Perhaps you might take this opportunity to start practicing college level work. I start most papers with “This paper will examine …….”. If I were writing your paper, I would write: This paper will examine the current state of the debate over genetic engineering and research. First, I will discuss….

I know it sounds dry, but it’s good paper writing. If you were writing a novel, a grand entrance would be appropriate. Good luck!

In this era of modern technology, questions have arisen regarding ethics, morality, and potential beneficial results of advances in science. One of the most argued about topics is genetic engineering research and development.”