when writing fiction, when u write about a character over hearing the conversation of two characters…?
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But the choice is ultimately up to you, you’re the writer!
It’s how you would like to portray the feeling that the overhearing character has.
In my opinion, Italics are generally used to emphasize things, but in this case, I’d say it be more used for a whisper.
So if you’d like to give the feeling that the co-conspirators are whispering, I’d say go for italics.
If anything else, just describe that perhaps the over hearer can’t make out all of the words.
Perhaps when writing the dialog, write incomplete sentences with the “…” in between a few grouped together words.
It’s all basically about how the writer wants to make it feel in my opinion.
Hope this helps!
Good question though. If my teacher was here I would ask him.
I don’t think it is a big deal..
If you find out it should be in italics you can always change it later.
Good luck.
Just an Idea, as long your not using italics
In summary: No.
EDIT.
It was mentioned above that you should always use good grammar. That would make for some very dull characters. Read Mark Twain, for example.
Example:
Jenny overheard Trish and Sara gossiping about her best friend in the lunchroom.
“Did you hear the latest about Linda?” Trish said. “Her mother went with one of her friends from work to a policeman’s ball to get fixed up somehow, and now this mother has three boyfriends at once.”
“My uncle’s a cop, and I overheard him and my aunt telling my parents about it the next day,” Sara said. “Auntie said that she saw Linda’s mom throwing herself at other officers who were single and unnattached. And there’s a good number of them here. I wonder how many numbers she picked up?”
“I feel so sorry for Linda. Her mom and all those men.”
“I always knew her mom was a tramp. My Mom knew she was a tramp. But ohmigod, this is ridiculous.”
“That girl is going to be screwed up.”
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