This is my first introductory paragraph:

“As briefly mentioned in the above paragraph, it is believed that this theory will make it easier for students to get into a good college because they will have met all of the college requirements. There are way too many stories heard, about good students not being able to get into college because of insufficient credits or the right classes were not taken. And the lengthening of the school day will definitely help to prevent these types of situations from happening more often than not.”

Now all I need is like a statistic that shows how many kids DONT graduate school on time, or at all..because of insufficient credits. Basically, a statistic that supports my 1st para.