Takes a lot more than 4 sentences to see if you have University level writing ability.

Okay you asked for honesty so here is my honest take on your writing skills.

Does Buffon have more class than (then not than) any other player in the world? (Your opening is not really a question but more of a statement) To me, (needs a comma) yeah he does. First of all he remained loyal to the great Juve, (needs a comma) which we all respect, me especially. He also talked with Zidane after Zidane got ejected from the game in the finals of 2006 World Cup.(Why is this sentence important to me?) As I said before, (needs a comma, is a fragmented sentence without one) your actions on the pitch show who you are in real life.

All paragraphs need an introduction, explanation, and closing. To be honest yours doesn’t have these traits.

Does Buffon have more class then any other player? When we review his actions during play two things stick out in my mind. The first is the way he remained loyal to the great Juve when he could have just ignored him. And the second is when he talked with Zidane after his rejection from the 2006 World Cup. I think we can agree that only a great player of world-class standings would do such a thing. Does Buffon have more class then any other player, to me he does.

Though this is a proper paragraph it’s still not the best that could be written but I do not know enough on the subject to make it more then what it is.

Don’t fret on this as it takes most people years to be able to write on a strong academic level. Remember the old saying, “Practice makes perfect.”

—-not very clear and yeah is not good use of the language . Publishing is a very competitive business and only for very few does it pay. It’s probably OK as an interest if you enjoy writing but I can think of lots of other hobbies that would be more enjoyable and better for you never mind your bank account. I have known a published poet who wrote me some interesting material. He was however always short of finances and had problems with accommodation (a place to live) I have also been acquainted with a writer of books for teenagers but she had a teaching degree to fall back on and I have not heard of much success although I have read some of her published books and gone to the book launches. I have been tempted to do my own publishing and printing however an expensive hobby and could be just a waste of resources as publishers do have ties with book shops. Where would one sell?

You could maybe write a Book about Mental Illness?