A few days ago
jtoy23

Essay Correction?

What can i do to make this paper stronger:

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dcd66hwv_13mhn6g7

help is needed asap

thanks!

Top 1 Answers
A few days ago
Anonymous

Favorite Answer

I like your essay. However, you need to recheck your grammar. The last sentence of your first paragraph, for example, needs correcting. Have should be has.
0