A few days ago
ButtErFlY

check this and tell me if it sounds good plz?

Dear Mr. Kelly:

I attended the Career Fair at *********Campus today September 19th, however I couldn’t find Goshen Services, LLC. I will receive my Bachelor Degree of Science in Business Administration with emphasis in Sales and Marketing this October. I noticed that Goshen Services has positions available in the marketing field, for that reason I welcome the opportunity to discuss my qualifications and any marketing position in more detail. I may be reached at (123) 456 – 7899 or e-mail me at [email protected].

Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sincerely,

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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Sounds fine to me!

You might add ..

“I’m available for an interview at your convenience.”

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A few days ago
Ryan D
its great
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