A few days ago
USA

can you please help me with this as to HOW to word this correctly??

My resume is enclosed for your review and consideration for the position # ….. Staff Asst VI.

I have excellent qualifications to bring to this position. I offer many proven abilities that I believe qualify me to be a significant asset to your organization, including:

management skills, strong attention to detail and outstanding training abilities.

I am a results oriented individual who offers dedication, enthusiasm and experience to contribute successfully to your organization.

I look forward to discussing these and other qualifications I offer during a personal interview at your convenience.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Respectfully,

Top 5 Answers
A few days ago
JAS

Favorite Answer

Well I love it, the only thing I would think about changing is the 2nd organization. Maybe use another word that time, like company, or what have you. Well done.
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A few days ago
Colleen S
2nd paragraph:

I am a results-oriented individual with a strong desire to be a part of your respected organization and to contribute to its ongoing reputation for excellence.

3rd paragraph:

I look forward to discussing my qualifications and goals with you during a personal interview at your convenience.

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A few days ago
leeroy_101
Include the fact that you have excellent communication skills, even if you don’t, employers always want people with good communication skill,s even if you were only applying for a toilet cleaning job, which im sure you are not!
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A few days ago
jboatright57
Wow, that is worded very well. Put a dash between results and oriented. Good luck.
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A few days ago
Teash
Sounds great ~ go for it!
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