Can you critique my writing assn?
” When it Rains it Pours”
Dakotah Schickling 10/1/07
This quote is about how sometimes when one little thing goes wrong, something just as bad happens after that
and it just keeps worse. I think of it as falling down a flight of stairs. I experianced this last summer when my
friend Amy and I went on a trip to Canada. The first thing that went wrong was that when we got to the border, we
couldn’t find are birth certificates. So we were freaking out opening suitcases and bags untill finnally we found
them under a seat. And after that we got lost on the way to the camp site and by the time we got their it was
pouring rain. It rained the next day also so that we couldn’t go to Marine Land because closes when it rains. So
we basically stayed in our tent being bored and playing card games hoping it would be sunny the next day. So it
turned out to be a beuatiful day me and Amy were exited because we were going to go to paramount park. But of
course their was a flaw, over the night Amys mom got really sick, so we had to pack up everything and go all the
way back to New York, without doing any of the fun things we planned.
Favorite Answer
wrong was when we arrived at the border
amy and i were excited
amy’s mom
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