A few days ago
Anonymous

would this sentance be appropriate?

5. Living in the mountains in a shack, the taciturn former assassin lived alone.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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Well, the sentence structure is a bit awkward. Try this:

Living in a shack, on a mountain, the tactiturn former assassin lived alone.

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A few days ago
aswkingfish
NO this is two separate sentences. You should also capitalize Taciturn.

In a shack in the mountains. The former Taciturn assassins lived alone.

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A few days ago
ashnperry
I would change it to- In a shack in the mountains, the taciturn former assassin lived alone. Or-Living in the mountains, in a shack, the taciturn former assassin was alone.

The repetition of live (living, lived) doesn’t flow all that well.

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A few days ago
Lynn
5.) The taciturn former assassin resided alone in a shack located in the mountains.
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A few days ago
Kimi
“The taciturn former assassin lived alone in a shack on a mountain.”

I wouldn’t use the sentence you already have.

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A few days ago
puurplemooose
Sheltered in a moutain shack, the taciturn former assassin lived alone.

???

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A few days ago
Bill
“The tactiturn former assassin lived in a mountain shack.”
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A few days ago
Me
How about resided instead of lived?
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A few days ago
lightellen3
Leave of “Living.”
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A few days ago
legallykellyette
i dont even under stand two of those words or the whole sentence all together
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