Try to use a combination of complex and simple sentances. It will give your work nice variety and flow. For example, if you like to draw:

Instead of: My hobby is drawing. I draw all the time, and my favorite thing to draw is cars.

Use something like: My favorite hobby has always been drawing, and along with that daydreaming. My favorite thing to draw is cars, and I always practice so that I can develop my skills, hoping to one day sketch that dream car that forever eludes me as it dances around in my imagination. Transferring what you see in your mind’s eye onto paper is one of the most challenging things of being an artist, and also the most exciting. The beauty of imagination is breathtaking, and I know the only that I will be able to capture that with my pencil is through practice. Not only is drawing fun, but you can create something stunning along the way.

Teachers love when you write like that, I figured that out really quick. 😉 Can you say A+? You get the idea. Always write more than what the question asks of you, and really get into the topic and write from the heart. You’re gonna ace the class. 😛

And if I were you I wouldn’t steal what I just wrote. when the time comes around and the teacher asks you to write something else, and she notices a style differece in the writing, you’re in big trouble mister. ;P

Good luck!

TV is my Window to the World.

I live in a small community, in very rural area. I don’t have the choice to jump in the car and go to a movie here. I have to drive an hour. Wal-Mart is also not here.

I like to know what is happening.

I like to learn new stuff.

I like having the world in my front room, I will never get to see as much in person.

I have a choice, I can or don’t have to watch stuff. Sometimes it seems like with all the channels nothing is on! LOL

I love to watch NASCAR, football, etc.

I can invite the world in or shut it out when I want.

When I’m playing one of these kinds of game, I feel that I’m really in their world talking, walking, fighting…

It makes me forget the real world and that feeling is so cool.

It lets me dive into an amazing story where I have control of what happens.