A few days ago
Anonymous

what do you think of this??

i posted a question like this already and the advice and help that i got on it was really amazing and helped me alot, so this is my new and improved one.(plz any advice that you have tell me)

may red be the colour of the blood you lose in an act of amazing courage

may green be the colour of the grass you sit on for being so courteous and,generous letting an elderly womanhave the empty seat on the park bench

may white be the colour of the snow you watch fall from the sky ever so clam and peaceful; fantasizing that the world could be so.

may blue be the teardrops that fall from your overwhelmed eyes; you’ve finally succeeded, for what you’ve yearned and desired

may pink be the colour of your cheeks when you get complimented for being an outstanding human being;)

may yellow be a bright, a flare of hope that leads you through the toughest of troubles .

and may clear be the colour that shelds you from the blacks and jealous greens ; and continues to keep you pure and strong

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A few days ago
Eden*

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It’s lovely, I would certainly award it 26, and allow you room to make little alterations, but I really enjoyed it, thank you
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