A few days ago
jimmy

Thesis Statement?

I want to do my thesis statement on education and my teacher is really picky. Is this good. “More Knowledge leads to higher opportunities in life for several reasons”. Please help

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A few days ago
Bananaman

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You might want to be more specific, e.g. what kind of knowledge and the type of opportunities you are refering to.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
“MORE KNOWLEDGE leads to HIGHER OPPORTUNITIES IN LIFE for SEVERAL REASONS

You must have had a pretty good idea and that would certainly be a good topic but you have to narrow it down. WHY? Here are the reasons:

1.) MORE KNOWLEDGE – can be skills, expertise, education, math, science etc. But that can also be knowledge in creating a bomb, in making prank calls, in how to rob a bank (that may be too brutal but not unrealistic since knowledge is everything you know and that includes that)

——–> so which among those listed above are you going to focus? what I can suggest here is replace MORE KNOWLEDGE into something more narrow but focused like HIGHER EDUCATIONAL LEVEL

2.) HIGHER OPPORTUNITIES – this too is very broad as there are lots of opportunities. We can say business opportunities, promotion opportunities, opportunities to have a vacation, opportunities to continue studying, opportunities to make money. AND then again, there are opportunities to kill somebody, opportunities to rob, opportunities to make a person look bad.

——————–> Ask yourself, what or which of those opportunities are you willing to focus? I suggest to replace HIGHER OPPORTUNITIES with something Achievable and simple like HIGH PAYING JOB or ABILITY TO PERFORM WORK.

3) IN LIFE FOR SEVERAL REASONS – there are a lot of stages in life and what are these several reasons? there are a lot. There are reasons in higher opportunities like, because you are smart, because of its ability to chat, to present, because your beautiful or because you cheat. And I suggest that you delete that because it is not relevant.

You can say

* A Study on the Relationship Between Employees’ High Educational Level and its Ability to Perform at Work

* A Study on the Relationship Between Employees’ High Educational Level and in Landing a High Paying Job

* High Educational Level Leads to Higher Job Positions

You can choose among those or better yet, check out the samples in http://www.coursework4you.co.uk/sprtdis1.htm .More tips on how to choose a topic and how to make a thesis are found here too! Check them all out, and hope it helps. http://www.coursework4you.co.uk/How_to_Find_Good_Dissertation_Topics_for_Masters_or_MBA.htm

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A few days ago
notyou311
No, it should be more specific. Ex: A college degree can bring about more life opportunites such as …

Mention each opportunity and then write a paragraph for each one.

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