+Reader should know what the question or topic is by reading ur thesis

+include the main categories or subtopics ur gonna write about

+If it’s short like these sentences, not a good enough thesis, usually

Can’t write u a thesis cause I don’t know what main things about children pageants your against.

Use facts and opinions to take a position on the topic that others might challenge. You need to grab their attention and persuade them into thinking what you do.

It really isn’t hard. Just remember, a good thesis makes the reader think and takes a lot of time to perfect.

Good Luck, and don’t worry. Thesis writing is easier than it seems and you really need to do it on your own. Because when you get in coollege you wil have to do thesis papers ALL the time, amd you will no one to help you.

An example to begin might be something like:

Jean Piaget, a well known child psychologist once stated, “the principle goal of education is to create men who are capable of doing new things, not simply of repeating what other generations have done – men who are creative, inventive and discoverers.” To this end, beauty pageants stiffle young girls from being all they can become due to there…A, B, C. (Insert what you will be focusing on in your paper.)

The thesis would be the sentence that begins, “To this end,….”

Hope this gets you started!