A few days ago
Etak Eidlog

Somebody help write this poem.!.!?

Its about dreams, It has to have 10 syllobals each line, you’ll see the ryming pattern in the first bit i wrote:

My eyes start to close and i fall asleep,

It’s dim and frosty but my pillows soft,

I had a dream and a secret it will keep…

HELP ME! (the next line has to rhyme with soft)

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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It would sound better if you said my pillow is soft and why does it have to rhyme with soft nothing else rhymes ?

I had a dream and a secret it will keep…

For others to know would cause them to weep

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A few days ago
Anonymous
I had a dream and secrets it will keep

Of kissing you last night in the hay loft

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A few days ago
gtp1225
Ok, but check your 3rd line (it has 11 syllables)

I want to wake but can’t due to Zoloft

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A few days ago
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