A few days ago
just bored

punctuation help?

please help me with the punctuation

My name is Belinda Antu, my ideal profession is to be an elementary school teacher. I currently stay at home with my 2 children ages 1 and 3 and I also baby sit most mornings. My most important reason for going back to school is to better the lives of my children and myself. My biggest strength would have to be my knowledge with the computer with the knowledge I know I can and will succeed with Kaplan University. My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments or even doing then wrong and not knowing it.

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A few days ago
~*Missez*~

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My name is Belinda Antu. My ideal profession is to be an elementary school teacher. I currently stay at home with my 2 children, ages 1 and 3. I also babysit most mornings. My most important reason for going back to school is to better the lives of my children and myself. My biggest strength would have to be my knowledge of the computer. With that knowledge, I know I can and will succeed with Kaplan University. My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments or even doing then wrong and not knowing it.
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A few days ago
AgonyAuntie
Here you go . . .

My name is Belinda Antu, and my ideal profession is to be an elementary school teacher. I currently stay at home with my two children — ages 1 and 3 — and I also babysit most mornings.

One of the most important reasons for my going back to school is to improve the lives of my children and myself. My greatest strength is my knowledge with the computer, with the understanding that I know I can — and will — succeed at Kaplan University. My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments, or possibly doing them wrong and not knowing it.

I will, however, always strive to do my best in doing my work at Kaplan University. I will endeavor to achieve the best I can to achieve my goal in becoming a teacher.

Best of luck . . .

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A few days ago
♥yessy♥
My name is Belinda Antu, my ideal profession is to be an elementary school teacher. I currently stay at home with my two children ages one and three years of age.During my spare time I baby sit most mornings. The reason I decided to go back to school is to improve the lives of my children and myself.

(revise this sentence) My biggest strength would have to be my knowledge with the computer with the knowledge I know I can and will succeed with Kaplan University.

(there is repitition/revise) My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments or even doing then wrong and not knowing it.

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A few days ago
sun_beam61
Sounds like you will be fine…! Give yourself some credit..

that is why your going back to school! Good luck!

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A few days ago
compendious
Do you have a specific question about punctuation?
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