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My name is Belinda Antu, my ideal profession is to be an elementary school teacher. I currently stay at home with my 2 children ages 1 and 3 and I also baby sit most mornings. My most important reason for going back to school is to better the lives of my children and myself. My biggest strength would have to be my knowledge with the computer with the knowledge I know I can and will succeed with Kaplan University. My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments or even doing then wrong and not knowing it.
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My name is Belinda Antu, and my ideal profession is to be an elementary school teacher. I currently stay at home with my two children — ages 1 and 3 — and I also babysit most mornings.
One of the most important reasons for my going back to school is to improve the lives of my children and myself. My greatest strength is my knowledge with the computer, with the understanding that I know I can — and will — succeed at Kaplan University. My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments, or possibly doing them wrong and not knowing it.
I will, however, always strive to do my best in doing my work at Kaplan University. I will endeavor to achieve the best I can to achieve my goal in becoming a teacher.
Best of luck . . .
(revise this sentence) My biggest strength would have to be my knowledge with the computer with the knowledge I know I can and will succeed with Kaplan University.
(there is repitition/revise) My greatest fear is not understanding how to do my assignments or even doing then wrong and not knowing it.
that is why your going back to school! Good luck!
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