Bonjour, je vais parler de Jerome Tillet. Il a 16 ans et il est étudiant (“estadunidense”<= I guess this is supposed to mean "student" ?) vivant en Californie. Ses qualités sont qu il est très patient, intelligent et honnête. A part ca, Jerome est aussi très sympathique et toujours de bonne humeur. Mais Jerome a aussi des défauts de caractère. Il est assez agressif (before you said that he was very partient...hm quite strange), ambitieux et (parfois) très angoissé. En ce qui concerne son apparance, il est très beau ayant les(/des) yeux bleus et les(/des) cheveux courts ( masculine hair- whatever you mean by that- would be: cheveux virils). Puis, il est grand, mince et musclé (you could also say: bien foutu... but that s rather slang). Comme Jerome aime bien jouer au football américain il est aussi très sportif. Sinon, il aime bien le chocolat et ..........(don t know what you mean by "filtrage pina"). En bref, il est quelqu un de spécial.

Hmmm, it’s been a while since I took french, but I could understand what you were saying, mostly, so I think it’s ok. You write ‘Le il a’ or ‘Le il est’ a lot to mean ‘he has’ or ‘he is.’ Perhaps it is right, but I was never taught that at school. We were always told to write just ‘il a’ or ‘il est.’ Also, I’m sure you just wrote it quickly on here and that’s why, but be sure to check you put in enough full stops and capital letters. You’ve left some out. For example, after saying where he lives you move to a new subject, so you should start a new sentence.