My anwser:

(To)Be able to work with different people, (to have) flexible hours, and (to have) a postive work experience.

Is this good? ANything catchy? Could be longer……

2) What Past Experiences have you had?

My response:

I am a current volunteer at Raccon City Hospital in (the) fields of Materials Management, and (i work) in the Gift Shop. (i have) Dedicated more than 260 hours of service to my community (,) because the best way to move forward is giving back. Also,(i have been) spending Thursdays working with children from all ages at Kumon ( kumon what? specifiy ). Hope i could help 🙂

My answer:

(I want this job so that i can) be able to work with different people (and in) flexible hours. (i also think that this is an opportuniy for a )postive work experience.

2) What Past Experiences have you had?

My response:

I am a current volunteer at Raccon City Hospital in (the) field of Materials Management, and (also at) Gift Shop. I dedicated more than 260 hours of service to my community (for i think) the best way to move forward is giving back. (I also spend my) Thursdays working with children from all ages at Kumon.