A few days ago
Anonymous

please revise and edit my paragraph?

If people believing in evolution ask me how I can tell God is the one who created you, I would answer simply to look at the nature and your own bodies. Then, they would be wondering what I am talking about. If so, I’d inform them all the forests, animals, and we are created by an omnipotent, transcendent creator, my God. The crowd once again wonders how I can tell God is accompanied with me right this moment since the people cannot see, touch, or feel him. In that case, I bring scientific evidence. For instance, water freezes at zero degrees Celsius, but it doesn’t freeze in the deep water. It has some kind of heat. Therefore, fishers in the North Pole go fishing even if the temperature is way below minus thirty degrees Celsius. If the water that is not on the top froze at the zero degrees, all fish, plankton, and mammals would eventually die because of the coldness. I would state that how amazing my God is that he classifies in every detail. He really cares our environment.

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A few days ago
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A few days ago
Kushal H
Original version:

If people believing in evolution ask me how I can tell God is the one who created you, I would answer simply to look at the nature and your own bodies. Then, they would be wondering what I am talking about. If so, I’d inform them all the forests, animals, and we are created by an omnipotent, transcendent creator, my God. The crowd once again wonders how I can tell God is accompanied with me right this moment since the people cannot see, touch, or feel him. In that case, I bring scientific evidence. For instance, water freezes at zero degrees Celsius, but it doesn’t freeze in the deep water. It has some kind of heat. Therefore, fishers in the North Pole go fishing even if the temperature is way below minus thirty degrees Celsius. If the water that is not on the top froze at the zero degrees, all fish, plankton, and mammals would eventually die because of the coldness. I would state that how amazing my God is that he classifies in every detail. He really cares our environment.

New version:

Look in your own bodies. Look at nature. You are probably wondering what I am talking about. God created the forests, animals, and us. We cannot see, touch, or feel God at the moment but think about it for a moment. Why does water, the liquid needed for life, have the highest density at four degrees centigrade above freezing? Why does water have this seeming anomaly? My opinion is that it all falls in place. It is simply amazing how much love and care God has put into his creation. If water froze solid instead of the way it does, all fish, plankton, and mammals at the poles and other cold places would eventually die because of the coldness.

God really cares about us and the environment in which we live.

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A few days ago
Miss Sally Anne
Sounds perfect to me.
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