Also, there’s quite a good deal of wordiness going on. Extraneous words you don’t really need. So I’d suggest trimming things down, so you can better understand what you’re saying (because, no offense, but it’s pretty confusing). If there’s a simpler way to say something, with less words, it’s usually better.

So first, instead of “people believing in evolution,” I’d say “believers of evolution.” There’s no verb to worry about there, therefore less confusing and more accessable. Then instead of “can tell” I’d say “know.” Instead of “simply to” I’d say “to simply.” Then, you say “they would be wondering what I am talking about.” Maybe say, “they might be confused.” Because then you say “If so,” as if you weren’t sure if the people would be wondering, yet you had stated previously that… they would be. Say “I’d inform them *that*” so they know what you’re informing them of. Don’t say “forests, animals, and we,” say “and the people of the world” or something to that effect. I had no clue what you were talking about. Instead of using a comma to separate “creator” and “my God,” use a colon (:). That’s what those things are for. Then, again, instead of “I can tell” say “I know.” And say “God is with me,” because “accompanied” doesn’t make sense in this situation. Don’t say “Therefore,” just say “Fishers in the North Pole,” because it sounds forced otherwise. Instead of “the water that is not on the top,” …. say “the water at the bottom.” And specify “all the fist, plankton, and mammals IN THE WATER,” because… not everything on earth would die if deep water froze. Say “I would state, “How amazing my God is! He pays attention to every detail. He really cares about our environment.” ” Use quotes.

That’s all I can think of. Hope that helps.