A Subjective Narrator is the character in a story who speaks about his/her experience within it . Death Note, a novel I read, for example, is about a detective searching for a killer who only uses a book to kill his victims.

~~~This has nothing to do with your paragraph~~~~The book is called death note because you put the persons you want kill name and you have to know there appearance and write down their cause of death. The main point is its about his experience His thoughts and his words.

~~~You could say:~~~ The detective is the subjective narrator because he tells the story and can only describe his thoughts and feeling and does not know thoughts and feelings of other characters. The detective only knows what other characters have told him or facts that he has learned from some other source.

~How long does this “essay” need to be?

1. The next Morning, everyone except for David, was silently having breakfast in the jade, glamorous garden (near?) the house. before and wordlessly make it awkward to read. 2. David, however, was sleeping on the couch in the living room because had spent a long night in front of the TV, watching the news UNTIL two o’clock in the morning. 3. “A triple tier stone fountain was in the middle of the sunny, daylily garden. It was surrounded by many colors of ornamental trees, which leaned their slight shadows on the simple, beige breakfast table below them.” This is out of place. You go from talking about david then back to the outsside. It’s confusing and needs to be rearanged with a lead in sentence. Maybe something like Everyone else was busy looking at the… or something of that nature. Or maybe Back in the garden there was… 4. Is this the first time you introduce Angela? if not don’t worry if it is Angela need a description.