A few days ago
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my essay…what do you think?

All over the world it has been said that getting a post-secondary degree is more important for us than it was for our parents and grandparents. Some people disagree with this statement. Others think it is a logical way of thinking. In my opinion, it is more important for me to get a post-secondary degree than it was for my parents or grandparents.

One reason why it is more important for me to get a degree than my parents or grandparents is because before it was easier to get a job without a degree. Now it is harder because big or new businesses require more knowledge so the business can be successful and hopefully become bigger. The government is now shutting down some businesses because the workers do a poor job or the products are not working right, or in grocery stores, the food is expired. Now managers are being stricter about the degrees so their business will be successful and the workers will do the work properly. If everyone had the necessary knowledge for the job, they would have more shoppers because the products are of good quality and price.

Another reason is because with a degree people earn more money which is necessary because these days gas, oil, diesel and other non-renewable resources are becoming more and more expensive each day due to the fact that most of it is gone and once it is, there is no way to get more. Earning more money is also important because it will be easier to support the family and pay the bills without having any debt to pay off in the future. It will also help to keep the household together and equipped with the necessary materials needed for school, work, and any other purposes.

Top 5 Answers
A few days ago
chocolateluver

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WOW. HELLA GOOD. likee if u were to rate it from a scale of 1 to ten, i think that its like a 9
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A few days ago
JonJon
A+ I Agree With Everyone Else. The Essay And Pretty Goold And Has Lots Of Detail, But Be Sure To Do A Conclusion Paragraph.
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A few days ago
dicovi
yes good you have some good ideas and examples however you need to edit for grammar and sentence structure.
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A few days ago
Animal Luverr™
IT IS SOO AWESOME. Very good work!!!!!!!! A+ if i were to grade it! you might want a conclusion paragraph?
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A few days ago
CollegeObsessed<3
really good now!!! A++++!! 10000000%!! lol. very good job!!
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