Just 2 sentences help?
and coud anyone help me write 2 or 3 sentences after this sentence to elaborate or “unpackage” the emotions or to draw it out…make it graphic…would u be able to do 1 sentence on the father’s emotions or sumthing…and then another sentence or two on her emotions/feelings…like “I could feel his fingers imprinting on my neck…I was scared to death….” sumthing of that sort of thing please! Thanks!!
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The harsh voice yelling out louder with pure anger and frenzy, “You will really die, kid!”
,tore before my father’s very eyes, his young daughter’s heart.
I gasped for air and said this with my heart full of despair, “Oh God, the agony, I’m suffering, please
don’t let me die. Father, dear father, please spare me, I’m your daughter.”
..i dunno if it’s good..i’m kinda tired..i’ll try to improve it if you want to..(lol)..i was amazed by Kaare Norge’s guitar performance (youtube) that really blazed my mind with excitement and awe.
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