A few days ago
pollypolly000

is this story good ??

Long , long ago, in a land far away , the queen vampire sat at the highest point of wisdom castle, as she sat there she twidled her thumbs nervesly and held her magic septer clasped in her hand.

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A few days ago
blueskies

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Yes… it is a great start… but what about a middle and an ending? You got me interested… now I know what else happened… =) I feel left hanging… and wondering… please help to resolve the suspension….

by the way, nervesly is spelled “nervously” … and septer is spelled “scepter”

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A few days ago
Yahoo!
why is it that since the lord of the rings and spiderman, we can’t even write stories that are not unreal?

Gimme a Break!!

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