A few days ago
Is This A Good Thesis Statment? Help Please!?
Do you believe the government, who said that a lone assassination, Lee Harvey Oswald, a man who was know to have a bad shoot on a rifle, was able to shoot a moving target three times, two of them hitting the President, in under six seconds? I think not.
Please tell me what you think of it, and/or any corrections that you would make.
THANKS!
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A few days ago
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That seems like it would be more of an attention getter for a paper. A thesis statement for that would say something like “Lee Harvey Oswald could not have been the President’s assasin because…” and then you would list 3 reasons that support your opinion. A thesis statement should not be a question.
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A few days ago
Definately too wordy…. try to take out the less important facts and summarize more.
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A few days ago
i thought the thesis statment had to be the last sentence of the 1st paragraph?….
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