A few days ago
pereira_marisol

Is This A Good Thesis For My AP Paper On A Book?

MY THESIS:

The author tries to persuade his readers in “1776” that the americans won by luck by telling the Revolutionary War in great detail on how the ill experienced and undisciplined american troops won against the greatest army in the world.

yes or no? and why?

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A few days ago
betyoucantfindme

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That is a very long thesis statement. Try cutting it down so it is clear and concise. Is your argument along the lines of: McCulloch says americans won by luck, and he says this by providing great detail?
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