A few days ago
abirdinhand

Is anyone good at paraphrasing paragraphs?

I have to paraphrase three paragraphs in Stephen Gould’s “Women’s Brains” essay. I have attempted to do this, but I find it utterly difficult to interpret his style of writing.

Help, please!

P.S. You can find his essay here:

http://www.angelfire.com/pop2/tcs1/womensbrains.htm

Just open the PDF that’s in the link under “1.” (If you’re interested in helping at all.)

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A few days ago
thatguyjoe

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this is a difficult question. Not because I can’t do it, I like how Gould wrote, but because this is homework help and I don’t want to do it for you, just help you.

So why don’t I say what I take to be the general theme after glancing through the essay. you can then see if that really is the theme and, if so, use it to help you paraphrase three particular paragraphs:

Traditionally people have thought men are smarter than women. When scientists measured brain size, they assumed that men were smarter and looked for evidence to support this. So they found that men’s brains were bigger and thus concluded that men are smarter. But they should not have assumed. They should have more carefully analyzed the evidence. For instance, does a bigger brain always mean smarter? Men are generally bigger than women, is intelligence more a matter of brain size in relation to the person’s over-all size? They didn’t test this because they assumed men were smarter so whatever argument would support this assumption was accepted without question. More research is needed. But in the end we shouldn’t rely on this sort of comparison between groups. Individual variation matters much more and we shouldn’t make one group think that it is limited and incapable of acheiving just because we think there’s some scientific difference between the groups.

Now, if that makes any more sense to you (and Gould wrote far better than I do, so it might not) you can try to use it as a guide when you yourself paraphrase three particular paragraphs. If it doesn’t help, keep trying. According to Gould you probably have an excellent brain.

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5 years ago
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It’s important to cite your paraphrase in the text of the MLA paper, so that you give credit where credit is due. When paraphrasing a quote in MLA format, you just need the author’s last name and page number, but you’ll have to provide more information about the source in the “Works Cited” page at the end of your paper. Here’s how to cite the paraphrase within the text of your MLA paper:
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