A few days ago
Tony H

I need to make my essay more exiting…?

Hi everyone~! I’m in 6th grade and I need to make my essay more exiting (I’m suppose to be editing for language) Give me some tips please~!

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A few days ago
rowdyfoudy

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Well, for one you could pick a topic thats interesting and also have lots of interesting details and facts to impress all of your friends. But then again I have no idea of what you are allowed to write about but I’ll give you some topic ideas from different subjects. For example if it had to do with music pick an interesting artist to talk about like Jimi Hendrix or John Lennon. If you had to explain what you did for summer vacation explain all the interesting things (if there are at all) like vacations or trips to interesting amusement parks or museums leave out all the boring uninteresting details that might bore you’re audience. But if you had to choose a specific time in history some potiential topics could be Alexander the Great, The Civil War, or WWI. Remember whatever you have to write make sure to have a wide vocabulary (to impress the teacher), proper grammar, and many interesting facts. Good luck.
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A few days ago
old lady
More exiting? You mean going out more? Or more exciting?

It’s a little hard to make suggestions when I have no idea what your essay is about, but you could always improve it by giving lots of examples and interesting references.

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