Hi there,

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I’d write it in a satire form. A satire essay is basically like sarcasm. Its like saying the opposite of what you mean, but making it so everyone who’s reading it, or whoever you’re reading it to knows you are joking. Such as, if you hate the cafeteria food, write “The amazing dung-flavored green mashed potatoes, scrumptious undercooked fish sticks, and the deliciously sour milk are some of the primary highlights of my lunch period. Lunch simply wouldn’t be the same without these delicious food-group friendly treats and eats.” And you can just go on from there. The best way to write a satire essay is to write a normal essay, but to then flip it around into a satire essay by simply making it the opposite, and making some minor details to make it a little funnier and so that people will actually enjoy it. Good luck

More Time To Eat!

Shouldn’t are lunch be longer? We shouldn’t have to be rushed to eat. Lunch should be as long as the other classes. We need a change!

Many kids are trying to gulp down their milk and shove a cookie down their throat on their way to emptying out their trays. They don’t have enough time to set down and have an enjoyable lunch with their friends.

It is all rush, rush, rush! And if we don’t hurry up, the lunch ladies threaten us with debits. I am sorry if I don’t eat fast enough for them!

Perhaps if students were given at least a 20-minute period to sit at the table with their food, as recommended by food and nutrition professionals, we wouldn’t talk as much during class and we wouldn’t be so hungry when we got home. We get 30 minutes to get our food, eat it, and go outside for recess. And the kids who walk to lunch end up in the back of the line. And they don’t get their lunch till 15 minutes later and only get 13 minutes to socialize and eat a healthy meal because everyone must be out before the bell rings. So kids gobble down their food to avoid debits. And gobbling down food can lead to stomach problems, overeating and dash-dining habits that can transfer to adulthood, school nutrition experts say. Some wonder whether those habits are connected to rising obesity rates.

I understand that they want us to have more learning time and want everything to stick to the schedule. But I don’t see why schools can’t extend the school day by 10 minutes to give students time to chew their food. It makes sense to me.

this is my essay from 6th grade? idk, it’s pretty bad. it might not all make sense to you either because our lunch system was probably a lot different than your schools.

Here are some facts, because I had a report like this too:

school lunches are usually very unhealthy because: there’s a lot of fat in school lunches, few schools offer fruits at lunches, and most schools offer coke, which is all people buy at the drink machines.

talk about how unhealthy it is. Use google or yahoo search to find articles – there have been plenty in the news.

Having other ppl write your essay so you can just copy and paste is lazy. Do your own work.